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in reply to: Lianne Kaye – Glow (Nef Remix) #14838
My apologies to real piano players. I love writing for piano but I’m very much not a pianist. :D
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NefNice laid back groove in the verses and good use of varying enegy levels. Too many entries just stay the same throughout the song for my taste. This approach is so much more interesting.
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NefBass player? :D
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Nefin reply to: Lianne Kaye – Glow Production (Rock) by Dave Shaw #14826Great job with the harmonies (both implied and played)! Many reharmonizations don’t pay enough attention to the flow of the vocal line. Yours does and takes interesting turns too.
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NefRelaxed but still energetic, nice one!
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Nefin reply to: Jean-Luc Rumèbe – Lianne Kaye – Glow production #14812Nice to hear another piano centric contribution! I had half a rock mix done before scrapping everything and going for a piano accompaniment. :D
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NefThanks for helping! I just experimented with chords and clearly heard “searching” followed by “then piecing” instead of “when piecing”.
Just had to *not* actively listen for the lyrics. :D——————————–
— VERSE I ——————–
Falling, deeper down
Invisible, I guess your time ran out
A ghost in a haunted houseDamaged goods is all you think you hold
You’re clinging on but everyone’s let go
You’re high then you’re so low— PRE-CHORUS I —————
But you keep on thinking too much
Reliving everything you had once
But just hold on
Cause you’re not done— CHORUS I ——————-
Stand out, let the people stare
(Or) wear a crown with you colored hair
They’re all sheep too scared to lead
And in time you’ll seeScream it out, tell them all your pain
(And) stick around, cause everything will change
If they try to dim your light
It won’t show
Cause you’ll just glow— VERSE II ——————-
Searching for your soul
Then piecing back the pieces that you’ve thrown
Away for far too long(It’s) wearing out the heart on your sleeve
The hole in your chest makes it harder to breathe
(But) don’t admit defeat— PRE-CHORUS II ————–
Just start by stopping this pain
Swear nothing’s gonna knock you again
And just hold on
Cause you’re not done— CHORUS II ——————
Stand out, let the people stare
(Or) wear a crown with you colored hair
They’re all sheep too scared to lead
And in time you’ll seeScream it out, tell them all your pain
(And) stick around, cause everything will change
If they try to dim your light
It won’t show
Cause you’ll just glow
Yeah you’ll just glow— SOLO ———————–
— CHORUS III —————–
Stand out, let the people stare
(Or) wear a crown with you colored hair
They’re all sheep too scared to lead
And in time you’ll seeScream it out, tell them all your pain
(And) stick around, cause everything will change
If they try to dim your light
It won’t show
Cause you’ll just glow
Yeah you’ll just glow -
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