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  • NefNef
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    My apologies to real piano players. I love writing for piano but I’m very much not a pianist. :D

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    NefNef
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    Nice laid back groove in the verses and good use of varying enegy levels. Too many entries just stay the same throughout the song for my taste. This approach is so much more interesting.

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    NefNef
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    Bass player? :D

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    Great job with the harmonies (both implied and played)! Many reharmonizations don’t pay enough attention to the flow of the vocal line. Yours does and takes interesting turns too.

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    Relaxed but still energetic, nice one!

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    Nice to hear another piano centric contribution! I had half a rock mix done before scrapping everything and going for a piano accompaniment. :D

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    NefNef
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    in reply to: Lyrics #12149

    Thanks for helping! I just experimented with chords and clearly heard “searching” followed by “then piecing” instead of “when piecing”.
    Just had to *not* actively listen for the lyrics. :D

    ——————————–

    — VERSE I ——————–
    Falling, deeper down
    Invisible, I guess your time ran out
    A ghost in a haunted house

    Damaged goods is all you think you hold
    You’re clinging on but everyone’s let go
    You’re high then you’re so low

    — PRE-CHORUS I —————
    But you keep on thinking too much
    Reliving everything you had once
    But just hold on
    Cause you’re not done

    — CHORUS I ——————-
    Stand out, let the people stare
    (Or) wear a crown with you colored hair
    They’re all sheep too scared to lead
    And in time you’ll see

    Scream it out, tell them all your pain
    (And) stick around, cause everything will change
    If they try to dim your light
    It won’t show
    Cause you’ll just glow

    — VERSE II ——————-
    Searching for your soul
    Then piecing back the pieces that you’ve thrown
    Away for far too long

    (It’s) wearing out the heart on your sleeve
    The hole in your chest makes it harder to breathe
    (But) don’t admit defeat

    — PRE-CHORUS II ————–
    Just start by stopping this pain
    Swear nothing’s gonna knock you again
    And just hold on
    Cause you’re not done

    — CHORUS II ——————
    Stand out, let the people stare
    (Or) wear a crown with you colored hair
    They’re all sheep too scared to lead
    And in time you’ll see

    Scream it out, tell them all your pain
    (And) stick around, cause everything will change
    If they try to dim your light
    It won’t show
    Cause you’ll just glow
    Yeah you’ll just glow

    — SOLO ———————–

    — CHORUS III —————–
    Stand out, let the people stare
    (Or) wear a crown with you colored hair
    They’re all sheep too scared to lead
    And in time you’ll see

    Scream it out, tell them all your pain
    (And) stick around, cause everything will change
    If they try to dim your light
    It won’t show
    Cause you’ll just glow
    Yeah you’ll just glow

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