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  • JohnDJohnD
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    Like this one – good production ideas done tastefully and at the correct dB levels!! This one is easy on the ears….Good luck!

    JohnDJohnD
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    Inventive and dreamy – nice.

    JohnDJohnD
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    Very nice melodic lead guitar…!!

    JohnDJohnD
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    in reply to: Lyrics #13099

    Oops – have to make one correction on the 2nd chord in the chorus:
    Bb = Dm9/Bb?
    Bb(ii) = Bbsus2 at 2nd fret
    Dm(ii) = barred Am shape @5th fret
    F/A = F9(?)/A

    — VERSE I ——————–
    Dm9
    Falling, deeper down
    Bb
    Invisible, I guess your time ran out
    C5 Dm9 Bb C5
    A ghost in a haunted house

    Dm9
    Damaged goods is all you think you hold
    Bb
    You’re clinging on but everyone’s let go
    C5 Dm9 Bb C5
    You’re high then you’re so low

    — PRE-CHORUS I —————
    Dm(ii)
    But you keep on thinking too much
    C5
    Reliving everything you had once
    Bb(ii)
    But just hold on
    C5
    Cause you’re not done

    — CHORUS I ——————-
    Dm9
    Stand out, let the people stare
    F/A
    (Or) wear a crown with you colored hair
    C5 Dm9
    They’re all sheep too scared to lead
    Am C
    And in time you’ll see

    Dm
    Scream it out, tell them all your pain
    F/A
    (And) stick around, cause everything will change
    C5 Dm9
    If they try to dim your light
    F/A C
    It won’t show
    Dm(ii) C5 Bb5
    Cause you’ll just glow

    JohnDJohnD
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    Ahhhh refreshing! So well produced and executed. Nice surprises tucked in which is so important….Thanks for this!

    JohnDJohnD
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    in reply to: Lyrics #12607

    This is what I hear/see; not sure about some of the inversions….Good luck!!

    Bb = Dm9/Bb?
    Bb(ii) = Bbsus2 at 2nd fret
    Dm(ii) = barred Am shape @5th fret
    Am = Dm9/A?

    — VERSE I ——————–
    Dm9
    Falling, deeper down
    Bb
    Invisible, I guess your time ran out
    C5 Dm9 Bb C5
    A ghost in a haunted house

    Dm9
    Damaged goods is all you think you hold
    Bb
    You’re clinging on but everyone’s let go
    C5 Dm9 Bb C5
    You’re high then you’re so low

    — PRE-CHORUS I —————
    Dm(ii)
    But you keep on thinking too much
    C5
    Reliving everything you had once
    Bb(ii)
    But just hold on
    C5
    Cause you’re not done

    — CHORUS I ——————-
    Dm9
    Stand out, let the people stare
    Am
    (Or) wear a crown with you colored hair
    C5 Dm9
    They’re all sheep too scared to lead
    Am C
    And in time you’ll see

    Dm
    Scream it out, tell them all your pain
    Am
    (And) stick around, cause everything will change
    C5 Dm9
    If they try to dim your light
    Am C
    It won’t show
    Dm(ii) C5 Bb5
    Cause you’ll just glow

    — VERSE II ——————-
    Searching for your soul
    Then piecing back the pieces that you’ve thrown
    Away for far too long

    (It’s) wearing out the heart on your sleeve
    The hole in your chest makes it harder to breathe
    (But) don’t admit defeat

    — PRE-CHORUS II ————–
    Just start by stopping this pain
    Swear nothing’s gonna knock you again
    And just hold on
    Cause you’re not done

    — CHORUS II ——————
    Stand out, let the people stare
    (Or) wear a crown with you colored hair
    They’re all sheep too scared to lead
    And in time you’ll see

    Scream it out, tell them all your pain
    (And) stick around, cause everything will change
    If they try to dim your light
    It won’t show
    Cause you’ll just glow
    Yeah you’ll just glow

    — SOLO ———————–
    (same chords as chorus)

    — CHORUS III —————–
    Stand out, let the people stare
    (Or) wear a crown with you colored hair
    They’re all sheep too scared to lead
    And in time you’ll see

    Scream it out, tell them all your pain
    (And) stick around, cause everything will change
    If they try to dim your light
    It won’t show

    Dm(ii) C5 Bb(ii)
    Cause you’ll just glow
    Dm(ii) C5 Bb(ii)
    Yeah you’ll just glow

    JohnDJohnD
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    in reply to: She said HEAVY … #12598

    FuK YEAH! My fave so far….

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