A humble request

Hi fellow man … and woman …
Since I am relatively new to taking this mixing thing seriously, I would indeed appreciate it if some of you would give me some constructive criticism on my mix … actually it doesn´t even have to be constructive for that matter. I already uploaded my mix, so there´s no way to change it for the competition, but I at least learn from your comments. You can fin it on my soundcloud account called Trahberg.

Thanks guys … and girls …
Dave